PITCH

This is the video of my about my early ideas for my music video. As the people in my classroom are part of my TA, the feedback I received is really useful.
My first idea was quite basic, but thanks to the feedback, I am going to be able to improve it in order to meet the expectations of my TA.
My TA told me that I should have a twist of the simple narrative during the video to make it more interesting and to keep the audience looking at the video; some of the ideas I received to achieve this include making it look like it is happening in the past or adding some sad twist to the video like the death of one of my friends.
Although it was basic and simple, my TA liked my idea, so if I meet their expectations my video will be good.